Tuesday, 21 March 2017

How to.. - Procedural Writing

WALT write a successful procedure

I can state my goal in the beginning of my writing
I can be able to write a successful procedure.

Sunday, 19 March 2017

What Happens When You Are Bitten By An Insect?- Writing

You are playing outside and you hear a buzzing noise you think you are just hearing things but then you feel a tingling sensation.
Firstly… You feel the tingling sensation getting stronger and then you start itching really really badly. When you scratch you get this feeling and it's so sensational so you keep on scratching till it gets sore.
Secondly… But then you stop because you start to notice that there is a red lump that is starting to emerge… The spot where you have scratched will start to turn into a relish colour. Some people may or may not feel the bite. If you scratch even more well then it might just get infected. If it does get infected it would be sore and really red, it also might have a white lump right in the middle of the BIG RED INFECTION!!!!!!!
Thirdly… If you don’t have any cream from the pharmacy then you can just use:
  • Vinegar
  • Aloe
  • Or a dry bar of soap.

Why Do Mosquitoes Bite You Ask?
Mosquitoes bite because our blood is their food. Only the female mosquito bites….. Well they don’t actually bite they suck our blood. Did you know that mosquitoes find children tastier than adults… that's crazy right.
Finally…  It's the next day and you see the bump is slowly disappearing, It’s the next week your arm or leg is not infected any more and the redness and the white bump has disappeared!!!!!
These paragraphs of writing are explain to people 

What Happens When You Are Bitten By An Insect?

I have Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly and Finally before I have written my sentences.

Tuesday, 14 March 2017

Sunday, 12 March 2017

The First Duffy Show For 2017!!!!!!!!

This was our first ever Duffy Show for 2017. There was a lady and her name was global girl. Duffy and global were travelling around the world trying to help people. They were also doing live science experiments.


 Today we went swimming with the swimming instructors. We got taught how to do proper swimming. I was in group three. We learnt how to breath properly while we were underwater.

Our instructor said to not breath in while under water other wise you might choke on the water.
We had sooo much fun with the swimming instructors.
On the last day with the swimming instructors played games with us, it was so much fun!!!!!

Tuesday, 7 March 2017

My 2017 Goals!!!

These are my learning goals for 2017!!!!!!! I would like to improve on these.